Proofreading: Academic Scientific paper (topic: Machine Learning)Révisez quelque chose

We want you to proofread an academic scientific paper, which has already been accepted to be published in a scientific conference. We want to improve the overall quality of this paper. Especially, we need you to check for spelling, grammar and structure of the sentences. Deadline: for 28th July 2014 before midnight Word count: ~5,000 words Please do not contact us if you are not ABSOLUTELY sure you can do this for 28th July 2014 (before midnight). The main topic of this article is machine learning and consists in inferring a neural network from fluorescent calcium imaging. Here is the abstract of the paper: In this work, we propose a simple, but yet efficient method for the problem of connectome inference in calcium imaging data. The proposed algorithm consists of two steps. First, processing the raw signals to detect neural peak activities. Second, inferring the degree of association between neurons from partial correlation statistics. This paper summarizes the methodology that led us to win the Connectomics Challenge, proposes a simplified version of our method and finally discusses our results with respect to other inference methods. We provide you a 'pdf' file corresponding to the actual version of the paper (figures & mathematical expressions included), and a 'doc' file containing only the text to check. The expressions which shouldn't be modified will be written in 'red' within the 'doc' file (they generally represent mathematical expressions or references). There is not much work to provide, we just want to polish the paper and ensure that no error remains. Feel free to ask any question you have in mind.