. We want you to work on:
1. Punctuation
2. Grammar
3. Spelling
4. Reading flow
5. Improved sentence structure
6. Incorrect word usage or Vocab
7. Tenses
8. Maintain the tone and language of original writing style!
You are free to make any changes in it, you can also re phrase it at some parts, just make it error free in all aspects. But remember It should not lose its soul, I mean the originality.
My English knowledge are appreciable as i write many assignments ( 3 per month) and i think working with you would be an opportunity for me to showcase my knowledge.