ReWrite a creative business letter for selling a product/mngmt concept

Hello Folks, I need someone who is creative in re-writing a unique business proposition (see below draft) letter with a worthy view to attract the client’s attention with a creative sales pitch for marketing a collaboration of a product to the business partner (Air Fantastic). This should not be more than good quality 1,500 words and you must pay attention to details in our services that we offer to our partner and how we can add value to their business. The brief introduction and our business proposition is as follows; TOTAL AIR CARGO MANAGEMENT FOR AIR FANTASTIC Busy Cargo Pty Ltd is a 100% subsidiary of Air Zurks Plc. & Co., the second largest Russian Airline. Our head office in Moscow, Russia, Busy Cargo specializes in the total air cargo management which includes Sales, Capacity Management and Interline Cargo Agreements for 71 mandate carriers on a worldwide basis. A brief presentation about Busy Cargo can be found in the accompanying file. For more information about Busy Cargo, please visit [login to view URL] We would like to offer our total air cargo management expertise to Air Fantastic. We had conducted a preliminary feasibility study on Air Fantastic network and found that Busy Cargo can bring additional value for Air Fantastic. Busy Cargo total cargo management concept can increase ancillary cargo revenue and reduce cargo operating costs for Air Fantastic through synergy with our existing Australasia network thus ultimately contributing to risk free Air Fantastic profitability. To begin with, Busy Cargo can immediately contribute to increase cargo load factor and revenue on weak demand sectors between Australia and Russia. Should you require further information or wish to discuss this opportunity further, please do not hesitate to contact the undersign. Thank you and best wishes Deliverables – You must produce a unique master piece and must not copy or re-produce someone else idea which I shall not consider and will be ignored or deleted from the competition.