HI, KC. I offer to improve your text. I read it - your strategy of aiming efforts/texts at target publics is efficient, and the "free sample" call is a good hook, but your English needs corrections.
Relevant Skills and Experience
I´m American, a native English speaker with excellent language skills. I used to be sales/marketing manager for a seasoning company, and I can improve some points in your text, to define YOUR goal.
Proposed Milestones
$15 USD - Deliver the improved text in 2 days or less, making it more attractive to YOUR target public.
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