Hello there,
Here's my answer: " Initiative is the ability to think along new paths, and have the confidence to follow them. It's imperative we take initiatives in life because that is what separates the wheat from the chaff, and makes us stand tall in our own eyes. It is immaterial whether we fail or succeed...it is the path, not the end, that matters. Life is likely to get very humdrum in the absence of initiatives...call me a gambler if you like, but is that not what life is all about? Taking initiatives portrays a person who has the gumption to think outside the box and take up challenges."
Below is a rewrite:
Original:
Avast is typically known for their free antivirus software, but this version is stronger software in many ways.
On balance, Avast Pro Antivirus 2016 proved to be a strong contender this year with solid antivirus protection.
Their technical support isn’t great, but overall, Avast makes several much needed improvements to their antivirus offering this year.
Rewrite:
Popularly known as a free anti-virus software provider, Avast displays multi-faceted strengths, and wins us over with their sheer tenacity at virus removal and protection.
In a comparative study with other major players in this field, Avast stood its own, and gave strong competition based on its antivirus protection program.
In spite of their technical support not being their strongest suite, they have incorporated major improvements and marketed a very solid, vastly upgraded product.