Hi, I am interested in taking up your project. I have a BA in English Language and Literature. I have just completed a similar project and I have received positive feedback from my customer. I am able to do it within your budget of $1 per article and here is a sample of the rewriting work I have done: Original Version
They say home is where the heart is. And what could be worse than a troubled heart and disturbed mind? It’s human nature to worry about our safety - be it financial, emotional or physical. With this in mind, investing in home security is quite a rewarding experience. While burglar alarms and heavy grills help reduce external threats, it’s the internal threat of a fire breaking loose that troubles even the safest of homes. After all, when it comes to fire security, you can’t lock the threat out of the house - it’s already inside. Fire alarms may help alert you in the event of an outbreak, but prevention is always better than cure. Simple safety tips can help prevent a fire from breaking out and ruining your home and, worse yet, your life.
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Version ~ 1
We often hear people saying how important a home is to a man. There is nothing worst than the worries that keep on affecting your mind and troubling your heart. It is very natural for someone to get troubled by negative thoughts such as losing a lot of his hard-earn money, getting injured or worse still, losing someone you love. As such, home security is always welcomed and people are investing in it heavily and willingly. We can prevent burglars from breaking into our houses by installing security alarms and strong grills but we cannot possibly lock out the threat of a fire outbreak, which may already be lurking somewhere in the house, undetected by us. It is always good to have a fire alarm installed in case of fire, but it is even better to learn some useful information on how to prevent fire from breaking out. As the saying goes, ‘Prevention is better than cure." We do not want to wait till a great disaster had occurred before making that important move of learning how to prevent a fire outbreak in the home.
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Version ~ 2
People describe Home as where the Heart belongs. So, can there be anything more terrible than to have a grieved heart and upset mind? Every man has to be concern about his own well-being - be it in terms of monetary, passion or physical. As a result of this concern, home security investment is a very heart-fulfilling event that one should go through in life. Although external menace can be prevented by installing burglar alarms and strong metal grills, it’s the fear of a possible fire licking up the entire home and all its content that endangers even the most secure of all homes. After all, where fire security is concerned, it is impossible to lock out the fire menace which had already started in the house! You may install fire alarms to alert you should there be a fire in your house, but it is always better to prevent the mishap from occurring rather than to desperately seek a solution after that. Learning the basic safety tips can be useful in preventing a fire outbreak that will destroy your home and, worse still, your precious life.
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