Business Strategy Analysis Proof Read

I have an essay that requires proof reading by a competant business analyst. It's 2500 words, not too difficult, but I just require some feedback. As this job requires 15 - 30 minutes maximum of someones time I expect bids to reflect this - silly bids will not be entertained. I need to know if the essay is balanced or not, if it is structured correctly whether it answers the question, and what grade you'd expect to recieve for it. This is an urgent job, so will hire this evening, with view for payment by tomorow. Thanks Requirements - must be competant in business analysis & strategy (article writers please do not bid) - must simply read through 2500 words - provide feedback on quality as per above questions Maximum 30 mins of your time. MBA graduates advantageous