It's Jeff, The RAOKIN guy. I know I never got back with you regarding notes... I had a family situation that took all my time. I'm just going to hang onto the script for now as is. However, what I would like from you is:
1. A 2-3 sentence elevator pitch. When people ask what RAOKIN is... I never have a good answer. If you can use your talent I'd love help with that.
2. A Tag line below the name. I originally had Volunteer Revolution...but that's not clear and clearly overstating at this point. Then someone on the team came up with Random Acts of Kindness... Rewarded. I kinda like it because it shows where the name came from-- but rewarded... I'm not so sure.
Then You came up with Unify... to inspire.. Which I love but I wanted you to brainstorm some more to see if you can come up with something that explains ever better. Let me know, Thanks!!!