Design and Improve this Pitch Deck for Smipter : Uber for Social-Commerce

  • Status: Closed
  • Prize: $120
  • Entries Received: 15
  • Winner: yashb3701

Contest Brief

I will have soon to pitch with investor, but I want the better version of this.

Use this content (You can change if reasonable). Make it make sense, infographic (Option) and make it look clean and simple.

I want it in Keynote,(or Powerpoint) and PDF.

The attached file is in Keynote, or you can see it in PDF as well.

Clarity of presentation, creativity of presentation,

Ps.1 : Assume that we use logo below, but in red color and white logo.
Ps. 2 : We need less than 15 pages.
Ps. 3 : For March 14 Traction :
Event
IOS App 1.0
Android App 1.0
- Mou with WangLaoJi

Traction
- 1600 Shipments
- 105 Customers
- 52 memberships
- Start shipping for Taobao shops
- Growth 310%
- Gross Margin 42%
- 390 Driver Registration

Burn Rate : $12000

PS.3 : to give some idea : the landing page should be in the printscreen below. You can adjust font or whatever you want. But better to have the red(orange BG) with logo in white.

Ps.4 : Minimalism!!

Ps.5 : I have now update the logo

Rule of Judge :
1. We will give a vote from our company and customer by tomorrow at 16 Bangkok time and the vote will go on until the day after at 12 AM Bangkok Time.
2. Only 5 starts rating will be able to join vote list.

Recommended Skills

Employer Feedback

“Great One, we will hire you again. ”

Profile image kobenlee, Thailand.

Public Clarification Board

  • Elephantart
    Elephantart
    • 9 years ago

    congrats to the winner.God bless you.

    • 9 years ago
  • mireaiuliana
    mireaiuliana
    • 9 years ago

    hello, Yash3701 you have stollen my structure for the slides : Solution, Our competitor, Drivers, unfair advantage, traction 1 and traction 2 so i've got to semnalate this...it's not fair to stole somebody idea and only to change the design...I was thinking for 2 days how to arrange this presentation in order to be more corporate and you have copied it...let's win a contest with our work and ours ideas...let's do a honest work !!!

    • 9 years ago
    1. yashb3701
      yashb3701
      • 9 years ago

      Hello mireaiuliana I haven't copied your style... I just followed what the CH told me... :)

      • 9 years ago
    2. mireaiuliana
      mireaiuliana
      • 9 years ago

      I'm not saying that you copied my style but my structure. It's not the same thing. Can you please show me when you got the instructions to have the same structure like mine ...i wanna see the comments, please ? It's almost impossible that 2 designer have the same structure for one presentation because we think differently and in the beginning your direction was competly different. After I put my presentation you have posted your who...miracle have the same structure like mine. It's not coincidence...

      • 9 years ago
  • mireaiuliana
    mireaiuliana
    • 9 years ago

    Hello,

    • 9 years ago
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 years ago

    Please check #41

    • 9 years ago
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 years ago

    Please check #40

    • 9 years ago
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 years ago

    Please check #39 :)

    • 9 years ago
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 years ago

    Please check #38

    • 9 years ago
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 years ago

    Please check #37

    • 9 years ago
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 years ago

    Please check #35

    • 9 years ago
  • Elephantart
    Elephantart
    • 9 years ago

    hi kobenlee you need psd of this pdf or ppt(keynote)

    • 9 years ago
    1. kobenlee
      Contest Holder
      • 9 years ago

      ah PPT (Keynote) if you can

      • 9 years ago
    2. Elephantart
      Elephantart
      • 9 years ago

      Ok no worries.Just wait for today.I'll submit today.

      • 9 years ago
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 years ago

    Please check #34

    • 9 years ago
  • subhammittal95
    subhammittal95
    • 9 years ago

    Check Entry #33

    • 9 years ago
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 years ago

    I just saw that you made the other freelancer winner on your logo creation contest...Can I use my logo now in your slides or the winner's logo... ??

    • 9 years ago
    1. yashb3701
      yashb3701
      • 9 years ago

      yes sir, i am doing that only..today only you will get your PDF

      • 9 years ago
    2. yashb3701
      yashb3701
      • 9 years ago

      going to submit...

      • 9 years ago
  • subhammittal95
    subhammittal95
    • 9 years ago

    Hi Mr. Lee, I'll be uploading my presentation within 3-4 hours. Will be waiting for your feedback. I have made it very infographic using good colors & the structure is very good. Also, It has a very professional feel to it. I hope you like it.

    • 9 years ago
    1. kobenlee
      Contest Holder
      • 9 years ago

      Please be hurry to submit this pitch. We have to decide it very soon.

      • 9 years ago
    2. subhammittal95
      subhammittal95
      • 9 years ago

      I'll need high res images of all your team members by the way

      • 9 years ago
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 years ago

    please wait for my other submission

    • 9 years ago
  • pvaghela86
    pvaghela86
    • 9 years ago

    Thank you for inviting. i will submit the designs soon.

    • 9 years ago
    1. kobenlee
      Contest Holder
      • 9 years ago

      Please be hurry to submit this pitch. We have to decide it very soon.

      • 9 years ago
  • Elephantart
    Elephantart
    • 9 years ago

    We will submit soon.

    • 9 years ago
    1. kobenlee
      Contest Holder
      • 9 years ago

      Please be hurry to submit this pitch. We have to decide it very soon.

      • 9 years ago
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 years ago

    Please check #32

    • 9 years ago
  • kobenlee
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    The winner will be only one, but I found many presentation is really interesting. So, our team have decided that if some of you are not voted to be the winner, but we still consider to buy out your presentation for 30-50$ each. I would like you guys to set the price between this one, if you don't win and want to sell to our company.

    • 9 years ago
  • kobenlee
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    Rule of Judge :
    1. We will give a vote from our company and customer by tomorrow at 16 Bangkok time and the vote will go on until the day after at 12 AM Bangkok Time.
    2. Only 5 starts rating will be able to join vote list.

    • 9 years ago
  • kobenlee
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    Guys, I have some new guideline from Ps.2 - Ps.4! And I increase the price to 120 USD.

    • 9 years ago
    1. yashb3701
      yashb3701
      • 9 years ago

      Please check #30

      • 9 years ago
    2. yashb3701
      yashb3701
      • 9 years ago

      Please check #31

      • 9 years ago
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 years ago

    Check #19

    • 9 years ago
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 years ago

    Check #16 :)

    • 9 years ago
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 years ago

    Hello Sir, Thank You for the invitation for your next contest... :)
    Can I use my logo instead of the logo that you attached..In the Infographic ??
    Hoping for a reply from you.. :)

    • 9 years ago
    1. kobenlee
      Contest Holder
      • 9 years ago

      Yes, sure. You can use your logo.

      • 9 years ago
  • kobenlee
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    This is a nice presentation software (free trial). May be you should try.

    • 9 years ago
  • Elephantart
    Elephantart
    • 9 years ago

    thanks for inviting.

    • 9 years ago
  • kobenlee
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    Thank everyone to submit your pitch to me. I am really appreciated it.

    Better if you guys can make it "lean design" and emphasis on to make wording clear. Normally, I have only 5 minutes to pitch. So, when the investor look at each slide they would know what I am doing suddenly. I think infographic can help.

    This is some example : https://creativemarket.com/PitchStock/4423-Universal-Pitch-Deck-Two-Keynote
    https://creativemarket.com/PitchStock/4868-Universal-Pitch-Deck-Six-Keynote

    Thank

    • 9 years ago
  • mireaiuliana
    mireaiuliana
    • 9 years ago

    hello, can I change the images ?

    • 9 years ago
    1. mireaiuliana
      mireaiuliana
      • 9 years ago

      Can you communicate me your opinion about the presentation made. Do you want to apply some changes ? Many thanks !

      • 9 years ago
    2. kobenlee
      Contest Holder
      • 9 years ago

      Hi, Mireaiuliana. Thank for your pitch. I like your design and arrangement. However, lots of background is too messy. I want investor to concentrate on what I am doing. So could you please to make it clean? Compare to others, you have the better structure. So, if you just make the lean design that would make this presentation wonderful. Some tick : make more infographic.

      You can see some example in google by searching on "Pitch Design" .

      • 9 years ago
  • kobenlee
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    Thank guys for submition. However, could you guys please focus on making it lean and design? Also, good structure is important too. Some trick is just make it more infographic, or searching "Pitch Design". Also, we have the new logo please use it if possible.

    • 9 years ago
  • subhammittal95
    subhammittal95
    • 9 years ago

    Uploaded the 1st 2 slides, waiting for feedback!

    • 9 years ago
    1. subhammittal95
      subhammittal95
      • 9 years ago

      Well, Anything you would like to be changed! I'll start working on the rest on the slides

      • 9 years ago
  • shahirnana
    shahirnana
    • 9 years ago

    Thank for the rating ...any comment to make #1 entry 5 star

    • 9 years ago
  • subhammittal95
    subhammittal95
    • 9 years ago

    Hi, Do you want a 4:3 aspect ratio or a fullscreen 16:9 aspect ratio ! I'm going to make a powerpoint & PDF. I might do some language changes to make it more clear. Preferred language is English, right? Thanks

    • 9 years ago
    1. subhammittal95
      subhammittal95
      • 9 years ago

      Hi, can you provide me your mail ID? I need to send you the 1st 2 slides of my design

      • 9 years ago
    2. kobenlee
      Contest Holder
      • 9 years ago

      Could u make shot screen and put it to the contest? It does not allow to give email here.

      • 9 years ago

Show more comments

How to get started with contests

  • Post your contest

    Post Your Contest Quick and easy

  • Get tons of entries

    Get Tons of Entries From around the world

  • Award the best entry

    Award the best entry Download the files - Easy!

Post a Contest Now or Join us Today!